Marina Girls
Forgive me if I do pause
a while ..
But I feel the need to
breathe in deep ..
The sea sage scented
candles
that you choose to burn
each day ..
Remind me, oh’ so very
much
of all those marina girls
I ever loved,
or dreamt about, or dared
to try and
seduce, or merely touch
with poetry
..
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Good write N. Was KP one of those gals?! lol. Well, I never hardly see her. Dunno where she goes most of the time. lol.
that's probably just as well 🙂
(if Poesy, had a physical form
I too think it would be in the guise
of effervescent mermaids:
'beguilingly, illusive and endlessly
imbued with beatific sincerity
seeped, deep
in intensely, intuitive sensuality
that wisdom of feminine grace
and humane, empathy')
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
I'm just lucky you don't charge me
for endlessly inspiring
these humble scribbles of mine, Hyung
thank you!
I am spoilt rotten ........ and I do believe I shall sleep like a baby tonight ..
Ah those scents of the sea bring back the most seductive memories Nev. - - your lines remind me of those nights of gone dreams and the harbour boys who left us girls breathless..
sounds like my cuppa tea to me Fay ............. thank you my friend 🙂 x
The olfactory is such a powerful sense, how with just the hint of a scent we can be transported, without even realizing it, to another place, another time. A sweet poem of reminiscence with the smell of love in the air. Lovely my friend!
Your comment has more than just a mere hint of poetry about it Bella & for which I truly thank you 🙂
You touch many hearts with your poetry Neville.
Andy
what a smashing thing to suggest my friend .. thank you so much for that .. Neville
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