As quickly as my dreams appeared it vanished in the wind
I'm sure it will come knocking again, I'm just not sure I'll be in
The lights can be switched on but rarely am I home
Another day of wondering around in the shell I have become
All wealth may lay in my heart moving down this dusty path
Yet scraping shall remain as I hit half way through this game
Life can certainly be many dangerous threads untethered, I'll spend the rest of my days making plats in stormy weather
Knowing at the end nothing and all of it mattered.
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I know we should all be thankful for the next breath and may this year get better for each of us that survive it.. much peace and respect thanks again for being in it!
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(you've made my week brother, thank you!)
'All wealth may lay in my heart'
that's just pure distilled Genius!
gorgeously worded and so poetic
Happy New Year!
Ha, cheers buddy and glad I could return the favour.
Happy new year my friend
Nice writing Dan ) and happy new year
Like this line
plats in stormy weather ‘
Happy new year to you my friend and thank you for all your support and may this year be more delightful for us both.
Always appreciate
Those dreams will be there Dan and your life will improve even more than it has already, see my poem of today.
Andy
I'll be waiting my friend
I always knew there was something really cool hiding behind that flaming heart of yours Dan .. I wish you a contented and fulfilled 2023 good sir .. Neville
Back at ya and always appreciated my good friend!
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