When I am Forgot

Neville

When I am Forgot

 

once driven

now

firmly stuck

though

much less like

snow

these days

and more like

some

old rusty nail

perhaps

dear lord

how quick I am

all but

completely forgot

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 7th, 2023 03:06
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Goldfinch60

    You will not be forgotten Neville, after all I have one of your books.

    Andy

    • Neville



      Just between you & me Andy, I am a very honoured and humbled and truly grateful individual .. Thank you ever so much .. Neville

    • orchidee

      Oh no, not a 'has-been' like some clapped-out movie star past their sell-by date! lol.
      Or mutton dressed as lamb. I refer of course to KP. lol.
      Good write, erm,..., I forgot who ya are. Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido!

      • Neville



        How write you are Mr. O .. & Fido of course 🙂

      • Fay Slimm.

        A slice of regret comes over from this sad reflection on life and cleverly drawn out in the final lines Reminds me of the old saying that "Rusting maybe but when once really loved never is one forgotten" ...... x

        • Neville



          That's the spirit ..... thank you Fay .. x

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Forgetting- I could plan my own surprise party.
          You dear poet never.

          • Neville



            ha .. remember to invite this old fella 🙂

          • Poetic Dan

            It's so sad but true the world moves on pretty fast and I'd have to agree with you, at least we get to make a mark on each day that comes through!

            • Neville



              Sad it might be, but so good to hear from you Dan .. thank you my friend .. Neville



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