There was that day when you were born,
A day where you cried when you entered the world,
On that day your world rejoiced at your birth.
During your life ensure that what you do is good
So that when you die your world will miss you and cry,
And you will rejoice in the good life you have had.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Do good in your life.
- Category: Reflection
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Good write Gold.
One said 'Live so as to be missed'. he meant 'Live while in this world in good ways, so that you will be missed when you are gone from it'.
As with me, and all of us. But to my singing, they will say 'Good riddance!' Aww, they are horrible to me. lol.
Thank You Orchi.
Is this true of me AND my singing? They are not separate parts of me. lol.
Good or bad doesn't really matter, as long as it was the best that was inside you!
Much peace and respect
Always appreciated
Thank you Dan, we must always do our best.
Andy
Out of the way comment-
Abdul Kalam, India's former President said-
The one and only occasion when my mother rejoiced by seeing me weeping was at the time of my birth!
Your poem is a noble advice indeed!
Thank you mv, much appreciated.
Andy
We scream and cry on the day of birth, hopefully the last day will be different.
Hopefully if we have lived a good life others will cry rhmn_7, thank you for your comment.
Andy
Dear Andy I can only sigh, and tell you how beautiful this is, and how good it makes me feel. You've also chosen one of my favorite songs. God bless dear friend, you always lift us up.
Thank you Bella, you are most kind and I am most grateful.
Andy
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