why it can't last a little bit longer
why it comes like spring and then moves over
i wish to be embraced by you for eternity
but you left as a scent that touched ...
a mortal....
i searched the shallows for the depth you left
like a cup of tea overflowed by stress
i roamed the mountains the ruins and all
but never once i found the truth untold
at last so tired i came back and frowned
you were just standing there ..
giggling..
at the back of my door..
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Author:
amepiesces (
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- Comment from author about the poem: its about happiness..i wrote about it..thinking of its nature..and being with it..and how it comes suddenly and fades away suddenly too...
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'but you left as a scent that touched ...
a mortal....
i searched the shallows for the depth you left
like a cup of tea overflowed by stress'
wonderful imagery, I like how you put this together
especially the title
the back door or even the very back of a door
is a wonderfully complex
and yet, immediately relatable
image for out of reach proximity..
you have a wonderfully accessible way of writing
an impressive skill, so few are gifted
thanks for sharing dear Poet
a great read
thankyou for such praise and a generous comment...
This is so beautiful dear poet!
And so true.
Reminds me of a poem I wrote a while back ago entitled "If You Look Hard Enough You'll Find It."
It follows this battle between sadness and happiness.
Your words truly delivered.
Thanks.
thankyou for your review.. glad you liked it...
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