Seen.
Fragments of me
~ ~ ~ ~ will be muted
until what is seen
~ ~ ~ ~~ by my heart
is departure
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ from need.
Self is always
~ ~ ~ ~ wholly enough
Accepting this
~ ~ ~ ~ is to succeed
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: January 13th, 2023 04:13
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like I already said .......... uncanny .. x
Yup - --- uncanny indeed and what more needs saying. - -- 'cept - weird..........x
Dear Fay, you have succinctly and wonderfully captured the essence of self-awareness, packing into a neat little box with a golden bow. Thank you!
Oh yes dear Bella - awareness of the true self opens doors to far more freedom than we imagine. - - so pleased you enjoyed the read my friend.
I like the visual structure of this poem,
how it relates to the words, "fragments," "seen," "departure," "wholly," and "acceptance." The text speaks to the idea of self-awareness , but the visual implies the difficulty involved. Life and love are never easy. - Phil A.
How grateful I am that you saw what I had hoped would clarify the piece a bit more Phil. - You are so right that life and love are never easy to fathom out ways to stay balanced.
Our hearts show who we really are Fay.
Andy
Very true Andy - - our hearts show our deepest core. Thank you for your in-put.
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