Incomplete

ayoits_luka

Incomplete. 

 

As I stand at the base of the Everest, 

At the base of the sky 

What feels like the world, 

I can't help but feel so small 

So tiny among our worlds 

So helpless 

So. useless 

And useless I may be- 

Among this sky, 

This world 

This planet. 

For I mayn't contribute as far as mother nature provides 

But for I try. 

For I connect 

I close my eyes and lie still amongst the trees  

The soft spring breeze stroke my face 

I feel the clouds moving above me 

Moving 

Shifting 

For they are never still. 

They never remain. 

They never lie still amongst the trees 

They move. 

Moving 

Shifting 

Freely 

Freely amongst the skies 

Venturing as far as they destine 

And chasing their goals. 

 

 

I stand at the base of the Everest, and I think 

I think 

The thoughts spiralling my mind like snow in a shaken globe 

But my globe feels incomplete 

A piece 

Cracked 

Missing. 

Gone. 

A piece that flies among the skies 

Among the clouds 

Among the worlds 

 

 

I stand at the base of the Everest, and I try 

I try 

To seize that piece 

To capture it.  

To place it in the cracks. 

And I fail. 

I jump for the moon 

But I land with the stars 

But the stars are where the beauty lies 

Where the best view stays, stationary. 

But the moon is ever moving 

I ask myself,  

Why 

Why 

Why 

But I answer my own question 

Why? 

Why do the clouds venture across the seas, the land, the sky? 

Why does the moon run so far out of reach? 

Why does that piece feel incomplete.? 

 

 

As I stand at the base of the Everest.  

I can say 

I know why I feel so small,  

I am so small 

But the impact I make shall run far out of reach 

Far 

Far 

Far away 

Far away from the land and up to the moon 

Far to the peak of the Everest 

To the peak of happiness 

And I still feel incomplete. 

The feeling I have the utmost desire for 

Is so far 

Out of reach. 

  • Author: ayoits_luka (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 15th, 2023 16:30
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 13
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  • L. B. Mek

    ('useless'
    is, by its very name
    a kin, to 'use'
    maybe others at any, one
    snapshot perspective of Time or Place
    seem, to have more use
    or purpose
    yet
    none of us know, like
    those droplets, lost
    to monsoon showers
    which, drop
    will determine the birth of a brooklet
    or which brooklet, of the many
    that falter eventually, will
    end-up being that vital
    last addition, to birth a stream
    and-on
    till, we're looking up the majesty of waterfalls
    collated destiny's
    shaping the mountains of our planet
    Everest itself, sculpted
    by a mere droplet...)
    so be kind, to yourself dear poet
    last time i checked
    none of us had a vote
    in choosing to exist before, birth
    so we're all trying to correct, our fate's
    after the fact..
    maybe we should 'Reach'
    for those easier yields
    let happiness come n go
    in its illusive state
    while, we craft our days
    out of shallow smiles
    that never reach our eyes
    but so what
    if we but make it, to another
    daybreak
    we've won, and we get to throw
    one more day's worth of dice
    and see, if eventually
    we too, may roll sixes for a change
    or
    fly over mountains, in our dreams
    whichever comes first
    stay strong! thanks for sharing
    and choosing to fight
    and letting us know, we who recognise
    your words and relate
    are not the only ones
    aspiring to fly, even
    in our wingless state..
    to achieve, we must first
    envision
    that's what dreams are for

  • Caring dove

    A good poem engaging to read .. beautiful in its flow and words ))



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