She Smelt Like 24 Carat Gold
On reflection and in the heat of the moment she
smelt much like
24 carat gold may have smelt before her departure ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Strangely I can relate to the smell of reputedly odourless minerals though never had chance to sniff gold at so high a carat ! - -- your intimate lines can create memories dear Sire with the comparison your romantic words made - -- moer please- ........... x
My old sensei would often tell me everything has a taste, smell & sound .. & I believe him .. moer to cum, ................... maybe x
KP smelt like gold too - when it's heated and melted in smelting, that is.
That'll be her botox melting.
She wanted something 24 carat, so I bought her a bag of carrots! lol.
Now KP - don't say I never give you anything!
You are a very lucky ferret having someone put up with you like that Steven ........... š
This is a really sensual, great piece! In those moments she must have been like a treasure, like gold! x
You got it C ~~~~~~~~~~~~ pure gold š x
Is anyone else having the issue where you click on your public profile and it says a critical error is on the website?
I had never clicked on my own public profile before, until you asked that is .. but yes, it would appear so
Do you know why? Maybe not but Iām curious
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Sensual words Neville.
Andy
thank you Andy
Precious few words there, Nev................................(departing or departed......?) š
Now departed Dave .................... N
funny how we smelt, true worth
of those we've lost, after
but while in our hands, seemingly
like gold, they shine so dimly...
(clever and so true wise Poet
a wonderful nugget, to ponder)
sorry for your loss
thank you kindly .. and your seal of approval is golden sir
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