She Smelt Like 24 Carat Gold

Neville

She Smelt Like 24 Carat Gold

 

On reflection and in the heat of the moment she

smelt much like

24 carat gold may have smelt before her departure ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 21st, 2023 04:48
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Strangely I can relate to the smell of reputedly odourless minerals though never had chance to sniff gold at so high a carat ! - -- your intimate lines can create memories dear Sire with the comparison your romantic words made - -- moer please- ........... x

    • Neville


      My old sensei would often tell me everything has a taste, smell & sound .. & I believe him .. moer to cum, ................... maybe x

    • orchidee

      KP smelt like gold too - when it's heated and melted in smelting, that is.
      That'll be her botox melting.
      She wanted something 24 carat, so I bought her a bag of carrots! lol.
      Now KP - don't say I never give you anything!

      • Neville



        You are a very lucky ferret having someone put up with you like that Steven ........... šŸ™‚

      • Christina8

        This is a really sensual, great piece! In those moments she must have been like a treasure, like gold! x

        • Neville



          You got it C ~~~~~~~~~~~~ pure gold šŸ™‚ x

        • GenXer Shamrocker ā˜˜ļø

          Is anyone else having the issue where you click on your public profile and it says a critical error is on the website?

          • Neville



            I had never clicked on my own public profile before, until you asked that is .. but yes, it would appear so

            • GenXer Shamrocker ā˜˜ļø

              Do you know why? Maybe not but Iā€™m curious

              • Neville



                it seems the whole website is plagued with errors and glitches at the moment .. I imagine Julian will fix it soon .. at least I hope he does

              • Goldfinch60

                Sensual words Neville.

                Andy

                • Neville



                  thank you Andy

                • Doggerel Dave

                  Precious few words there, Nev................................(departing or departed......?) šŸ™‚

                  • Neville



                    Now departed Dave .................... N

                  • L. B. Mek

                    funny how we smelt, true worth
                    of those we've lost, after
                    but while in our hands, seemingly
                    like gold, they shine so dimly...
                    (clever and so true wise Poet
                    a wonderful nugget, to ponder)
                    sorry for your loss

                    • Neville



                      thank you kindly .. and your seal of approval is golden sir



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