sorenbarrett

The dance

Some see a fight between light and night

I see a dance

The more bright the sight, the darker the shadow of plight

The pendulum does advance

The melody's not wrong, all belong, it's the timing of your song

Listen to its beat then prance

In the throng, be strong, as you go along

Be in balance not askance

If skeptical, inflexible or too conventional

Your feet won't stand a chance

Let your response be intestinal, not just intellectual

Multidimensional is the dance

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 24th, 2023 04:54
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  • Bella Shepard

    I love the wonderful rhyming scheme of this poem as I read it aloud, its message so deeply felt. You so beautifully describe the equilibrium of life that we should strive for. This is such a fav!

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you so much Bella for your read and such generous comments.

      • sorenbarrett

        Dear Bella please write some more I deeply miss your poems and think I have already reviewed all that you have written.

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      • Doggerel Dave

        Your key word there, for me, is 'balance' with respect to the 'intestinal' and 'intellectual'. Can't fault that, Soren - thanks for laying it out so clearly.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks Dave for the read and comment/ Your right balance is the key in life or a dance.

        • Goldfinch60

          That balance in life is so important in us, may we all have it.

          Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you Andy for your review and comment. Yes may we all have balance.



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