Fay Slimm.

Raining a Yesterday

 

Raining A Yesterday.


They were an item, so very together, 
they were complete.

They had it all and their every desire 
left them replete.

But the He had changes of need and
warm became cool.     

Did He not see the She would resent
him less than true ? 

Raining a yesterday depressed once 
beautiful love.

Emotion shut out She floundered in 
mud of found proof. 

 

Yet as compatible ends angst knows 

sorrow passes 

after tomorrow's restoring rainbows. 

 

 

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 24th, 2023 12:20
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Comments6

  • Bella Shepard

    You describe so beautifully the aftermath of love, and the healing that begins with rainbows in the mind. Just loved it!

    • Fay Slimm.

      Your welcome summary of love's aftermath shines with understanding as always - thank you Bella for your visit and read of my take on allowing time to heal.

    • orchidee

      Good write Fay.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Thank you Orchi.

      • Doggerel Dave

        Beautiful story which portrays the dynamic of many a relationship over time with the reassurance of healing over more time. A depth of meaning simply put, Fay, thanks.

        • Fay Slimm.

          So right you are Dave -- many a relationship has to face saying goodbye to what was thought would last for a lifetime.......... thanks for your thoughtful review of my take on the subject dear friend.

        • Goldfinch60

          Wonderful words Fay, I now have that rainbow in my life.

          Andy

          • Fay Slimm.

            Ah - I thought you may relate to this piece dear Andy - thank you for dropping by for the read.

          • Neville


            how can I not just curl up in a ball and admit that I fell in love with these words .. the only reason is that duty call ........................ x

            • Fay Slimm.

              Cooo and Wowsers amigo - -- So glad to hear you fell in love with something that came from deep inside me - ---- words can work wonders at times when minds think alike - methinks............x

            • hotidris

              Amazing poem about how raining a yesterday had depressed a beautiful love.

              • Fay Slimm.

                Yes indeed a love can be depressed and eventually end - thank you so much for your welcome comment.

                • hotidris

                  You're welcome, Fay.



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