Raining A Yesterday.
They were an item, so very together,
they were complete.
They had it all and their every desire
left them replete.
But the He had changes of need and
warm became cool.
Did He not see the She would resent
him less than true ?
Raining a yesterday depressed once
beautiful love.
Emotion shut out She floundered in
mud of found proof.
Yet as compatible ends angst knows
sorrow passes
after tomorrow's restoring rainbows.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: January 24th, 2023 12:20
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Comments5
You describe so beautifully the aftermath of love, and the healing that begins with rainbows in the mind. Just loved it!
Your welcome summary of love's aftermath shines with understanding as always - thank you Bella for your visit and read of my take on allowing time to heal.
Good write Fay.
Thank you Orchi.
Beautiful story which portrays the dynamic of many a relationship over time with the reassurance of healing over more time. A depth of meaning simply put, Fay, thanks.
So right you are Dave -- many a relationship has to face saying goodbye to what was thought would last for a lifetime.......... thanks for your thoughtful review of my take on the subject dear friend.
Wonderful words Fay, I now have that rainbow in my life.
Andy
Ah - I thought you may relate to this piece dear Andy - thank you for dropping by for the read.
how can I not just curl up in a ball and admit that I fell in love with these words .. the only reason is that duty call ........................ x
Cooo and Wowsers amigo - -- So glad to hear you fell in love with something that came from deep inside me - ---- words can work wonders at times when minds think alike - methinks............x
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