Acceptance..
Fragments of inside
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ will always bleed
until what is seen
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ by minds as vital
is departure from
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ feeling any need.
Being oneself is
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ wholly enough.
Acceptance will know
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ how to succeed.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: January 31st, 2023 03:44
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Nice, superbly succint! I have of late been presented with such a situation wherein all three were wrapped up in the one - problem, challenge, and opportunity. What a progression, as is embodied in your latest post. Success carries with it a full and wholesome acceptance. Thanks Fay!
Great that you could relate to the write on Acceptance dear poet friend - - when success comes our way we are wise to remember how..
I'm accepting that this a fine poem Fay!
Good that you can pronounce the poem fine dear Orchi and thank you for your visit and read of Acceptance.
~ surely
~~ there is
~~~ no other way
~~~~ what's shore next line anyway x
Yes no other way foecasts success and Ooooooo well my next line is not for innocent eeeeears mine dear Sire...........x
It seems you have captured the stages of enlightenment in a brevity of words, which in itself is remarkable. I love the pic that you chose, it really punctuates this verse dear Fay. Great write, and a fav.
You visit and comment is greatly appreciated dear Bella - - am so pleased you liked the image which inspired the piece called Acceptance. Thanking you too for listing this one in your faves.
Accept all in your life and all will be well Fay.
Andy
Yes I agree with that wise advice dear Andy.
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