Brief.
The gaze
of latent sun falls on unsettled
events and
smothers hope of love's blaze ahead.
The breeze
of regret sighs quietly seeing
a teardrop
of temperate parting agreement.
The waves
ebb in wistful goodbye to our
brief moment
as time's crestfallen destiny sours.
The stars
tho' same as I, will remember
that our light
shone brilliantly when at its best.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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(sobering notes
words that gently caress
those scars we all carry
deep within)
another memorable read, dear Fay
'time's crestfallen destiny'
such a relatable wording
Sincere thanks again dear L.B.for your visit and comment on yet another view of facing life's challenges.
I briefly popped in to say good write Fay!
And I say a hasty thank you for popping in for a read my friend.
What a gently sad ending....Despite the sorrow, peace and tranquility pervades this piece for me, Fay.
You seeing the piece as gentle and tranquil pleases me greatly Dave as I meant the feel of the read to be just that despite an ending of a relationship - -- thanking you muchly.
try as I might, I can't be briefer than brill .. 🙂 x
Well that suits me right well my generous friend and thanking you for the read and the kindly comment........x.
Beautiful words once more Fay.
Andy
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