What I'm not

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  Goldfinch60 February 6th, 2023 03:16

  I am sure 'you are' soren and will always be there to give happiness to all.
  
  Andy

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    sorenbarrettFebruary 6th, 2023 04:48

    Thank you Andy for your review and such a nice thing to say. May your day be full of happieness.

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  L. B. Mek February 6th, 2023 04:10

  I really like distilled realism
  delivered with a spoonful of brevity
  refreshing to read nuanced veracity
  that hasn't been muddied..
  reads like a drop of freshwater
  clear, emotions
  perceived/contemplated
  through that microscope of Time..
  A great shorty dear Poet
  (so many relationships begin
  with assumptions
  of how the other person can
  in time, become
  the person we're actually looking for
  when, its more likely
  in waiting/manipulating
  for that person to change
  we're adding a toxic element
  to both our lives and forsaking
  what chance the relationship
  ever had to succeed...)

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    sorenbarrettFebruary 6th, 2023 04:55

    Thank you so much L.B. Your comments are deeply appreciated and looked forward to.