Unconnected thoughts


When God created the platypus

He did it with spare parts, I guess

The creature's a bit of this and that

My favorite aqua maniac


Citrus fruits all suit me best

So I like living in the west

If taters were my favorite thing

I'd live in Ireland and be a king


Verse one and two are unrelated

Have some poetic rule I've violated?

The Hell with rules I often say

I'm gonna do it my own sweet way

  • Author: hzugman (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 5th, 2023 10:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: Silly is as silly does
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Ok Waleed

    I’m assuming you don’t believe in evolution ?

    • hzugman

      Quite the contrary. I think that evolution is an accurate description of how things (continually) change. It explains correctly (in my opinion ) how successful variations succeed.

      • Ok Waleed

        What about Pokémon evolutions

      • orchidee

        Good write H.

        • hzugman

          Thanx, O.

        • jarcher54

          Very creative way of cheating by submitting two (or three?) poems in one day! Howard, I do look forward to your contributions! You are like a Dr. Seuss for adults!

          • hzugman

            Take two apserins and see me in the morning.

          • Doggerel Dave

            So it would seem, H. thanks for extending the riff...

            • hzugman

              Thanx DD. The riff extender that's me.

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