When a burning fever brews within
Fear of deserted dreams looms within
What on earth, between heaven and hell
Will cure this dreary spell?
A fresh mountain breeze
Will melt my mental freeze
The calm of a mountain stream
Will animate my empty dream
Is fever a state of mind?
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- Comment from author about the poem: I'm down with fever and cold , and that's why fever is all I can think about right now😬
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Comments3
May that fever soon end and you can walk with the wonder of Nature once more.
Andy
Thank you🥰
Thank you for your concern Andy🥰
A beautiful poem that can be interpreted differently, always makes for a great reread. I found it impressive that you wrote it while feeling ill.
Thank you so much for your kind words...I'm feeling much better now..thanks for your concern 🥰
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