My Feverish Mind


When a burning fever brews within

Fear of deserted dreams looms within 

What on earth, between heaven and hell

Will cure this dreary spell?


A fresh mountain breeze

Will melt my mental freeze

The calm of a mountain stream

Will animate my empty dream

Is fever a state of mind?

  • Author: Poetic persona (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 8th, 2023 08:57
  • Comment from author about the poem: I'm down with fever and cold , and that's why fever is all I can think about right now😬
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 19


  • Goldfinch60

    May that fever soon end and you can walk with the wonder of Nature once more.


  • thinkerbell

    Thank you🥰

  • gramann001

    A beautiful poem that can be interpreted differently, always makes for a great reread. I found it impressive that you wrote it while feeling ill.

    • thinkerbell

      Thank you so much for your kind words...I'm feeling much better now..thanks for your concern 🥰

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