indeed
dear cherished Poet, supreme
if all 'lifeline' philosophy
could be worded so accessible
maybe
all that search for meaning
would have lost
its hold on humanity's capacity
to evolve, already...
(standing at our stations of life
we calculate future's, inclusive
of connections, within
a hairbreadth of our scheduled
arrivals
while, Time and a smirking Fate
look-on, unimpressed...)
Hah -- that's the way to stave off further complaints methinks - short but often resulting in double- trouble - -- - another momentary peep behind moments. Great stuff Sir N..........x
I enjoyed your poem, dear N. Yes those fractions of a second can either be rewarding or disappointing, either way just a peek into a moment, thank you!
Dear Neville,
So he is what he is and
he isn’t what he isn’t …
he opined for a fleeting of a moment.
A very interesting write which I enjoyed perusing through.
the bald eagle flew in through the kitchen window at midnight .. but never made a sound while whistling the tune to so long marianne and carrying a lock of her hair ..
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Those fractions of seconds can be so dissipating Neville.
Andy
You bet' cha bill they may indeed be sir 😎👍
You spent that extra second that we had one year?
I spent it all at once. Boo hoo! Now it's gone for ever.
indeed
dear cherished Poet, supreme
if all 'lifeline' philosophy
could be worded so accessible
maybe
all that search for meaning
would have lost
its hold on humanity's capacity
to evolve, already...
(standing at our stations of life
we calculate future's, inclusive
of connections, within
a hairbreadth of our scheduled
arrivals
while, Time and a smirking Fate
look-on, unimpressed...)
feels like I'm havin one o them McDonald moments ....... I'm luvin it 😎
Hah -- that's the way to stave off further complaints methinks - short but often resulting in double- trouble - -- - another momentary peep behind moments. Great stuff Sir N..........x
thanks Fay ❤️x
I enjoyed your poem, dear N. Yes those fractions of a second can either be rewarding or disappointing, either way just a peek into a moment, thank you!
peeking can be a double edged sword .. it can be fun .. but it can also be quite painful .. thank you for taking one 🙂
so much can change in a fraction of a second. never let anyone else define you.
sage words indeed and already part of my survival kit 🙂
Dear Neville,
So he is what he is and
he isn’t what he isn’t …
he opined for a fleeting of a moment.
A very interesting write which I enjoyed perusing through.
Laura🌻
it is so bloomin good to see you here Laura .. thank you so much for dropping in 🌻
Terrific, Neville. The first thing I thought of was a gun fight. So bad of me.
I get ya JR & I thank you for that sir ...................... Neville 🙂
OK Nev I'm not going to blow your cover right now, so below is my lightly coded response:
Co-Ann was not quite broken, but some enlightenment ensued...
the bald eagle flew in through the kitchen window at midnight .. but never made a sound while whistling the tune to so long marianne and carrying a lock of her hair ..
Definitely a sign...... Hallelujah!
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