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I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
Woman & Man
do not weave the web of life
we are merely strands in it
That is why we must continue
To try and understand the weaver
Adaptation is difficult but not impossible
who do we assimilate too? Everything
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Interesting poem...we definitely need to understand the weaver rather than weaving complex webs around us
Thanks thinker bell, I agree completely. Last thing we want is to be tangled up in webs we create or others create, the untangling sucks but still possible
We do need to understand our life Ok but we must look outside the box in which our lives are trapped.
Andy
It feels like many boxes once we look over one there’s another to get over sigh
Every valley shall be exalted and every mountain and hill brought low; the crooked places shall be made straight and the rough places smooth;
Will the already smooth places have glitter ?
Probably not, makes the way a little easier to see though.
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