Redundant Crows
More lonely than a scarecrow even
standing in a fallow field ..
What will happen now though when
these semi-precious moments
and indeed, our murmerations have
all gone and flown away as well ..
Redundant Crows
More lonely than a scarecrow even
standing in a fallow field ..
What will happen now though when
these semi-precious moments
and indeed, our murmerations have
all gone and flown away as well ..
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Can ya beat a murmeration like ya can beat an egg?! As I say, I talk some rubbish sometimes. lol.
Hey, dont beat up on yourself like that Mr. O .. in a big bad & loud world such as ours, you are barely a murmur my furry friend 🦦🐀🐧😎
Very good question Nev - -what a natural learning curve are wonderous bird- murmerations - oh yes indeed - - "togetherness" if it really becomes redundant will without doubt cripple humanity with far more than loneliness - - an apt title too for your foreseeing write my friend.................x
Thanks Fay .. let's keep it between ourselves for the time being or everyone's gonna want a slice .. so hush, not a murmur ............... x
Really feel I should have used 'murmurations' somewhere..... I'll keep it in mind...thanks, Nev!
The feeling that like an expanding universe (but not in an inevitable or right way), we are moving apart from each other, has a certain resonance for me....
Aww thanks Dave .. we will neva move away from each other .. maybe 🙂
'murmerations'
that's such refined imagery
a word anchoring an entire poem
I bow to your mastery, Hyung
I read and learn
Many thanks brother Mek
So true Neville, what will happen.
Andy
........................ who knows, but bless ya regardless Andy 🐧
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