Redundant Crows

Neville

Redundant Crows

 

More lonely than a scarecrow even

standing in a fallow field ..

What will happen now though when

these semi-precious moments

and indeed, our murmerations have

all gone and flown away as well ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 18th, 2023 02:21
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Can ya beat a murmeration like ya can beat an egg?! As I say, I talk some rubbish sometimes. lol.

    • Neville


      Hey, dont beat up on yourself like that Mr. O .. in a big bad & loud world such as ours, you are barely a murmur my furry friend 🦦🐀🐧😎

    • Fay Slimm.

      Very good question Nev - -what a natural learning curve are wonderous bird- murmerations - oh yes indeed - - "togetherness" if it really becomes redundant will without doubt cripple humanity with far more than loneliness - - an apt title too for your foreseeing write my friend.................x

      • Neville



        Thanks Fay .. let's keep it between ourselves for the time being or everyone's gonna want a slice .. so hush, not a murmur ............... x

      • Doggerel Dave

        Really feel I should have used 'murmurations' somewhere..... I'll keep it in mind...thanks, Nev!
        The feeling that like an expanding universe (but not in an inevitable or right way), we are moving apart from each other, has a certain resonance for me....

        • Neville



          Aww thanks Dave .. we will neva move away from each other .. maybe 🙂

        • L. B. Mek

          'murmerations'
          that's such refined imagery
          a word anchoring an entire poem
          I bow to your mastery, Hyung
          I read and learn

          • Neville



            Many thanks brother Mek

          • Goldfinch60

            So true Neville, what will happen.

            Andy

            • Neville



              ........................ who knows, but bless ya regardless Andy 🐧



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