Oh blow wind, blow
Wash over me
Tussle my hair
Cool my skin
What are you
That treats me so gently
So lovingly
And yet I cannot see you
But hear you whispering in my ears
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Author:
Bella Shepard (Pseudonym) (
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Bella this is beautiful and strikes deep in the soul for the inner voice or conscious like the wind can be gentle and it can not be seen but is felt just the same.
Thank you dear friend, for your words are so kind and thought filled, as they always are.
Just the kind of greeting I need when I step outside on these very hot humid days Bella. I felt it inside just now (closed up in a vain attempt to avoid the heat).
You almost portray it as a lover, and I think that's right. The next suburb to mine had a very dysfunctional relationship with the wind - trees blown down , roofs ripped off and deposited next door....... I'm staying with yours....
Ah dear friend, I to have experienced the wrath of that fickle, windy lover. However in my part of the world the wind has settled to a gentle breeze, and dare I say hints of spring are on the way. Hope you get some relief from the heat and humidity.
another soothing insight
you've shared with us, dear poet
(dear friend, if you haven't - yet
may I recommend you read
Paulo Coelho's 'The Alchemist'
then contemplate your poem
in the context of the levante wind
and its capacity to deliver
the messages of lonely
and loving, heart's..)
Thank you dear friend for your kind words and reading suggestion. I've checked my library, and they have 'The Alchemist', it will be my next reserve.
Beautiful words Bella.
Andy
Thank you kindly Andy for reading my simple words.
This is really quite beautiful Bella and even with my hair cropped close, so easy to re-live and relate to ... Neville
Thank you dearest Neville, may the wind whisper softly to you always.
Hi Bella lovely writing ))
Thank you dear friend, so kind of you to read!
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