There are words that should never be said
There are questions that never should be asked
They leave echos long after you're dead
Who's answers canker, your soul to blast
Tears shed
Teeth gnashed
In visions that have blead
Reverberations of the past
Dreams that have fled
Hopes that are dashed
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sorenbarrett (
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So very true soren, once those words leave our mouths they cannot be retrieved.
Andy
Thank you Andy and at times they are held in peoples hearts for years before they are unearthed. Thanks for the review and comment Gold.
Although I think you are over egging it slightly Soren, I do believe it incumbent upon the producer of your words to consider the damage these words might do (especially me!)
Ouch!!! Just as I thought, now I have been damaged for life. I won't be able to get these echos out of my head and my pillow will be tear stained. Oh sorry I guess I'm over doing it agian. Thanks Dave I'll try to keep things under control.
Ouch!!! Just as I thought, now I have been damaged for life. I won't be able to get these echos out of my head and my pillow will be tear stained. Oh sorry I guess I'm over doing it agian. Thanks Dave I'll try to keep things under control.
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so true, dear Poet
(stones may break n bruise..
but words, can disintegrate
heart's
we, suffocate those we've
poisoned
for life, with our crude n cruel
comments
act like, it's alright cos it was said
in jest...)
Thank you L.B. for your welcome comments. As for me L.B. feel free to criticize as you deem best because I am hear to learn and my skin is not that thin. I respect your comments and welcome any suggestions.
oh i'm sorry my friend I wasn't criticising anything
just got carried away like usual and tried to scribble
a feeble poetic reply
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