Checking In
Having checked in,
washed her hair
and applied
the navy mascara ..
It was time
for her, to catch up
with events
since her last brief
departure ..
And for him,
it was an honour
to stop by
and to savour ..
All those words
she brought with her
and left there, at the table ..
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That's love
that's write 💙
Wonderful loving words Neville.
Andy
thanks Andy ................. 💙
Words? I never say anything to KP. I can never get a word in! lol.
I expect when she interrupts you mid sentence you feel you have to stoat all over again 🐁🦦 🙂
Sure do! lol.
Very detailed, I enjoyed it! Those words she left there at the table were yours to devour.....how sweet!
How very kind .. thank you Christina8
Indeed let departures be brief for those who checking in find love waiting again for exchanges. An insightfully gentle write our Nev......x
Thanks our Fay, I thought I might try & lull all these good people into a false sense of serenity 🙂 .. x
Trying as you do warrants success in all the poetry fields mon cher ami.
reads like a dotting father
watching that inevitable, distance
sprouting between him
and that precious gift, in his life..
(such a lovely tone to your wording and rhythm
an echo of life's, unfortunate inevitable)
thank you Hyung, a subtly poignant read
(sorry if I interpreted it wrong my friend)
Thank you brother Mek & both kindly and truly ..
Mascara, haven't seen that in years...
🌷🌷🌷🌷
I'm just an old man with memories and a pen 🥀
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