Cloudy Coffee Day.

Goldfinch60



I don’t know!!

I came in for coffee

On this dull grey day,

Came into my favourite coffee bar,

I’ve been coming here for years.

I order my coffee,

As I wait for it I get accused,

Accused of removing the light,

Taking the sunshine away,

Taking it away from her world,

From the world of the Barista.

I don’t know!!

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 22nd, 2023 02:25
  • Comment from author about the poem: We always have a laugh and a joke in the coffee bar, I have been going there ever since it first opened many years ago.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 23
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.

  • Neville


    I would get yourself a lawyer instead .. they are cheaper too .. 😎

    • Goldfinch60

      They may well be Neville, thank you for your advice. 😉😉😉

      Andy

    • Christina8

      Very cute write, Andy!

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Christina.

        Andy

      • sorenbarrett

        At first read this one was puzzling, however, on second read it was puzzling too. Then I found myself smiling and chuckling, still puzzled though. Anytime someone can make me laugh without me knowing why it's a stroke of genius.

        • Goldfinch60

          If I have made you laugh then I have done my job, laughter is a wonderful medicine.

          Andy

        • Doggerel Dave

          Got me there, Andy. I tend to be with Soren (above) on this one.

          Banter with a deep vein of irony?

          • Goldfinch60

            Banter with others shows a very meaningful relationship Dave. I have been going to that coffee bar longer than the current members of staff and they all know me very well as I go there so regularly.

            Andy

            • Doggerel Dave

              your answer should have at least been headed with an affirmation, Andy. Your responses need a little more thought - they tend to be slightly formulaic.
              I enjoy your stuff at the beginning and wonder how you do it every day.

              • Goldfinch60

                HI Dave, yes I do have banter with them, it shows a good relationship as banter always does.

                I enjoy writing and write every day, I have already written two poems today, one of which is now on the site.

                So glad you enjoy what I write Dave, it is much appreciated.

                Andy

              • John Prophet

                Ok, must be a little slow or maybe something unique to your side of the pond.
                Ever wonder what the world woke up to before coffee?
                JP

                • Goldfinch60

                  It is just a good relationship between me as a long term customer and knowing the staff.

                  I tend to wake up to tea but coffee soon come along John.

                  Andy



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