Always Singularly Noticed
You are that single
big leaf on a
small bonsai tree ..
The one
that is always
first noticed ..
A forget-me-not
in a field
full of sunflowers ..
A phoenix
reborn in a
meteor shower ..
Under no
obligation
to follow rules or
religion ..
A wild card,
an enigma in the
wake
of a star burst ..
As free as a virus
shaped like
a porcelain vase
and filled full
of longing ..
A warm glow
in the aftermath
of our very own summit ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Comments6
I never knew I was all those things.
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido! lol.
you gotta start believing in yourself Steven 🙂
Should I 'get my coat' and 'get out more?' lol.
Orchi, you are so deluded - It's me he's on about.... "Under no obligation to follow rules or religion .."
Firstly .. if you are moulting Mr. O .. then the answer is yes .. and secondly, you are not the only one Dave 🐧
Who would have thought it? Thought I was, Doc. Can you help me?
Beautiful metaphors and just plain a darn good read! "A forget-me-not in a field of sunflowers". Thats what I am. Something different in a sea of sameness. Great write!
if a metaphor can't be beautiful once in a while, then what's a metaphor for .. but anyway, if I were you Christina, then I would try and jot down any ideas I had around the phrase 'something different in a sea of sameness' before someone else does .. 🐧
will do! Thanks for the advice!
This is such a beautiful write dear friend. Wandering through this canvas of imagery, I can't help but get lost in it's "warm glow". This is such a fav!
I really can't thank you enough my friend and confess to being mighty relieved to see you here .. I seriously hope you are well ..
Thank you dear friend for your concern. I'm here and well, just slowing down a bit. I've been battling a few knee problems and started allergy shots, but on the mend. Your friendship is so greatly appreciated, I can't imagine not being here. Take care and God bless!
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Such true words Neville, we are all individuals that go our own way and have unique ideas.
Andy
Many thanks Andy
what a serenading waterfall of eloquence, dear Poet supreme
'A wild card,
an enigma in the
wake
of a star burst ..'
I'm gonna borrow this one Hyung, maybe I'll get lucky
lol
You are most welcome and I am of course, most grateful
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