Just in Case it Still Matters

Neville

Just in Case it Still Matters

 

Just in case

it still matters

or for what it

might yet still

be worth ..

Even with both

eyes firmly

held closed ..

I have noticed

your invisibility

no longer

becomes you ..

And as always,

I still see right

through you ..

But for

a moment back

then, it became

perfectly clear ..

You are still

very much loved

even though

you are totally lost ..

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 27th, 2023 02:19
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 51
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  • Goldfinch60

    May that loss soon be retrieved Neville. Emotive words.

    Andy

    • Neville



      Bless you kind sir 🙂

    • orchidee

      A fine write Neville.
      Meanwhile - KP's always been invisible to me! lol.

      • Neville



        Thanks for helping to make up the numbers Mr. O

      • Fay Slimm.

        The comfort of receiving these words would surely make a difference to one who was lost yet still deeply loved - -- a moving read..............x

        • Neville



          a comforting thought indeed .. thank you kindly dear Fay ... x

        • L. B. Mek

          (we keep our hand, reaching out
          till
          that very last! in hope we entrust)
          beautifully paced Hyung, so subtle
          made me remember
          some beloved people from my past

          • Neville



            ................................................................................................................. YES 🙂

          • Doggerel Dave

            Orchi and the making up of the numbers....... I'm doing my bit.....Anything to keep the whole arrangement on the road, Nev.

            • Neville


              I can see you are trying .................. cheers n all that jazz 🙂

            • Christina8

              A very moving write, N! It makes me think of those I have loved and lost. C

              • Neville



                thank you deeply C .. I bet you caught more than you ever lost though didn't ya & those that got away came back for more .................... 🌔

                • Christina8

                  Well....it's possible...lol

                • orchidee

                  I told ya KP: 'It don't matter; it will never matter' as long as you stop spending all my cash on botox!'
                  Go back to sleep Orchi. Why wake up to spout rubbish?! lol.

                  • Neville



                    If you got to sleep, then you are one very lucky furry thing sir 🐧

                    • orchidee

                      I should be hibernating ya know, as some furry things do. I shouldn't appear until Spring, but cooeee, I hang around like a bad....smell! lol.

                      • Neville



                        I shall have to start calling you Pongo 🦨🦨🦨

                        • orchidee

                          I brought that on myself. I should have said bad penny. lol.



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