Just in Case it Still Matters

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

Just in Case it Still Matters

 

Just in case

it still matters

or for what it

might yet still

be worth ..

Even with both

eyes firmly

held closed ..

I have noticed

your invisibility

no longer

becomes you ..

And as always,

I still see right

through you ..

But for

a moment back

then, it became

perfectly clear ..

You are still

very much loved

even though

you are totally lost ..

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 27th, 2023 02:19
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Goldfinch60

    May that loss soon be retrieved Neville. Emotive words.

    Andy

    • Neville



      Bless you kind sir 🙂

    • orchidee

      A fine write Neville.
      Meanwhile - KP's always been invisible to me! lol.

      • Neville



        Thanks for helping to make up the numbers Mr. O

      • Fay Slimm.

        The comfort of receiving these words would surely make a difference to one who was lost yet still deeply loved - -- a moving read..............x

        • Neville



          a comforting thought indeed .. thank you kindly dear Fay ... x

        • L. B. Mek

          (we keep our hand, reaching out
          till
          that very last! in hope we entrust)
          beautifully paced Hyung, so subtle
          made me remember
          some beloved people from my past

          • Neville



            ................................................................................................................. YES 🙂

          • Doggerel Dave

            Orchi and the making up of the numbers....... I'm doing my bit.....Anything to keep the whole arrangement on the road, Nev.

            • Neville


              I can see you are trying .................. cheers n all that jazz 🙂

            • Christina8

              A very moving write, N! It makes me think of those I have loved and lost. C

              • Neville



                thank you deeply C .. I bet you caught more than you ever lost though didn't ya & those that got away came back for more .................... 🌔

                • Christina8

                  Well....it's possible...lol

                • orchidee

                  I told ya KP: 'It don't matter; it will never matter' as long as you stop spending all my cash on botox!'
                  Go back to sleep Orchi. Why wake up to spout rubbish?! lol.

                  • Neville



                    If you got to sleep, then you are one very lucky furry thing sir 🐧

                    • orchidee

                      I should be hibernating ya know, as some furry things do. I shouldn't appear until Spring, but cooeee, I hang around like a bad....smell! lol.

                      • Neville



                        I shall have to start calling you Pongo 🦨🦨🦨

                        • orchidee

                          I brought that on myself. I should have said bad penny. lol.



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