Just in Case it Still Matters
Just in case
it still matters
or for what it
might yet still
be worth ..
Even with both
eyes firmly
held closed ..
I have noticed
your invisibility
no longer
becomes you ..
And as always,
I still see right
through you ..
But for
a moment back
then, it became
perfectly clear ..
You are still
very much loved
even though
you are totally lost ..
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May that loss soon be retrieved Neville. Emotive words.
Andy
Bless you kind sir 🙂
A fine write Neville.
Meanwhile - KP's always been invisible to me! lol.
Thanks for helping to make up the numbers Mr. O
The comfort of receiving these words would surely make a difference to one who was lost yet still deeply loved - -- a moving read..............x
a comforting thought indeed .. thank you kindly dear Fay ... x
(we keep our hand, reaching out
till
that very last! in hope we entrust)
beautifully paced Hyung, so subtle
made me remember
some beloved people from my past
................................................................................................................. YES 🙂
Orchi and the making up of the numbers....... I'm doing my bit.....Anything to keep the whole arrangement on the road, Nev.
I can see you are trying .................. cheers n all that jazz 🙂
A very moving write, N! It makes me think of those I have loved and lost. C
thank you deeply C .. I bet you caught more than you ever lost though didn't ya & those that got away came back for more .................... 🌔
Well....it's possible...lol
I told ya KP: 'It don't matter; it will never matter' as long as you stop spending all my cash on botox!'
Go back to sleep Orchi. Why wake up to spout rubbish?! lol.
If you got to sleep, then you are one very lucky furry thing sir 🐧
I should be hibernating ya know, as some furry things do. I shouldn't appear until Spring, but cooeee, I hang around like a bad....smell! lol.
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