Dancing With Joy.

Goldfinch60



Well that year went quickly,

A year spent dancing with joy.

Rocking and cerocing the time away,

Cooling down with foxtrot and waltz,

Dancing with passion and joy.

Losing time every evening

With  the dancing in her life,

Dancing with love and joy,

Love and joy of her dancing.

This passion has taken her,

Taken her from a bad place

To a place in her life

That brings so much happiness,

So much happiness to her,

In that year of dancing,

Dancing with joy.

So on this day Rachael,

This day of your birth,

Keep on dancing,

Dancing with joy.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 3rd, 2023 02:17
  • Comment from author about the poem: It is our friend Rachael's birthday today.
  • Category: Special occasion
  • Views: 16
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi.

      • orchidee

        A Vicar, not strict, said after a Chorus: 'You shall go out with joy, And be led forth with peace....' - lucky for Joy whoever she is going out with!' Not that he believed in 'luck' though.

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      • L. B. Mek

        hope she has a great day, Andy
        we all need that, something
        to engage with
        and offer us an escape
        from the repetitive dreary
        of everyday routine
        and dance, is a most wondrous
        activity
        for both body, mind and soul
        a child of music
        says it all

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Mek, she had a great day.

          Andy

        • Christina8

          May she have a wonderful day! Great write! Christina

          • Goldfinch60

            I saw her yesterday evening, she had been out with friends all day and was just about to go out again, she had had a great day.

            Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            All of life is a dance. Those that don't dance can not find the joy. Loved the poem.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you soren, dancing is a joy.

              Andy

            • Neville



              Happy birthday Rachael 💙

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Neville, I will convey your wishes to her.

                Andy

              • Bella Shepard

                There is freedom and joy in music and movement that is unique, It is there in every culture for a reason. What a lovely birthday poem this is. Best Birthday Wishes to Rachael, may she dance through life with grace and style.

                • Goldfinch60

                  So kind Bella, thank you, I ma sure her life will be one long dance.

                  Andy



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