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  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 3rd, 2023 08:24
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    So true by the time we think of it, it is already in the past. A Haiku?

    • arqios

      ...could be but not syllabically or by its theme. Probably best to let each reader decide for themself. Thanks S.

    • 2781

      Birds of the air

      • arqios

        cool thought there. And these birds have a perch or a nest in which to retire.

        • 2781

          The bird's of the air are flocking around, to snatch the seed out of our mouth.The battle is urgent to save the seed, get it out now and watch them grieve.

          • arqios

            Seed snatchers! Oh my!

            • 2781

              Not to worry, the fields are ripe.

            • orchidee

              You must have been enjoying yourself then, as it's said 'Time goes quickly when you're enjoying yourself'. Fido don't let me have too much enjoyment, in case I swoon!
              I really must 'get out more'. lol.

              • arqios

                If only! One day I shall make it a point to experience first hand what all this swooning is about. Then be done with it forever. lol

                • orchidee

                  Oh woe! it's Fido, he don't let me have any 'excitement' - whatever that may include? lol. I swoon at the slightest 'hot' poem. heehee.

                • orchidee

                  A verse there in 6.7.5. format I recognise!
                  I don't say 'metres' now, as that's something technical, to do with stress on certain syllables.
                  I only end up stressed about them syllables if I try to 'metre'!

                  • arqios

                    same here oc. I just rely on the good ole ear-muscle memory for the stresses and accentuation.

                    • orchidee

                      Erm, how many metres is it? 100? 200? Are we about to run a race? I'm a confused laddie. lol.

                    • Neville


                      time flies like the wind .. and fruit flies like banana's 🙂

                      • arqios

                        almost read that as fruit flies fly like bananas 😀

                      • Bella Shepard

                        I was just getting ready to say something really witty and profound, but a nanosecond passed, and the thought was gone, oh well. It is whimsical and sobering at the same time dear poet.

                        • arqios

                          ...that's so annoying how powerful nanosecond could be! An ailment that ails me.

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Time is lie that if you have had a good day, and you must have had a good day.

                          Andy

                          • arqios

                            That is so true!



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