Notice of absence from Ok Waleed
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
the will to want to live
can be diluted
wanting to take my life
a viable cure
I’m damned if I live
I’m damned if I die
I have a headache
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Author:
Ok Waleed (
Offline) - Published: March 4th, 2023 12:11
- Comment from author about the poem: Tired
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
Ohh, but you said you were so great! Do great ones like you get headaches?! lol.
Even Jesus farted, I think I’m allowed to get headaches from drinking to much wine
Well, could be, but the Good Book don't say so. It wouldn't be relevant to mention it.
But I thought you was super-human! lol.
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Don't say you're damned, you're not meant to lie.
I guess it’s the depression talking then
As a fine poet you should note the power of your words.
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The light will always be there in your words Ok, just keep writing them and all will be well within you.
Andy
Thank you Andy always I appreciate you
Being damned to live is a great privilege, but not always a pleasant one of course..
Thanks for understanding
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