Notice of absence from Ok Waleed
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
the will to want to live
can be diluted
wanting to take my life
a viable cure
I’m damned if I live
I’m damned if I die
I have a headache
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Author:
Ok Waleed (
Offline) - Published: March 4th, 2023 12:11
- Comment from author about the poem: Tired
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
Ohh, but you said you were so great! Do great ones like you get headaches?! lol.
Even Jesus farted, I think I’m allowed to get headaches from drinking to much wine
Well, could be, but the Good Book don't say so. It wouldn't be relevant to mention it.
But I thought you was super-human! lol.
Irrelevant to mention the most universally human bodily function? I wonder what else they decide to leave out. Also your perception is wrong I’m the greatest poet ever yes, human still, that’s what makes me great
Don't say you're damned, you're not meant to lie.
I guess it’s the depression talking then
As a fine poet you should note the power of your words.
I’m young and careless at times but you’re right thank you for the reminder I appreciate you
The light will always be there in your words Ok, just keep writing them and all will be well within you.
Andy
Thank you Andy always I appreciate you
Being damned to live is a great privilege, but not always a pleasant one of course..
Thanks for understanding
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