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I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
so you want to be better than I
well here’s a haiku to teach you
Be human, Be You, Be
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Author:
Ok Waleed (
Offline) - Published: March 6th, 2023 01:04
- Comment from author about the poem: Not really a haiku but whatever
- Category: Haiku
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So better than I
You would truly like to be,
Well keep on trying.
This is the haiku format but it is more a senryu than haiku, haiku are about nature senryu are about human nature.
Andy
Woah I never heard of senryu I think I’m going to focus on that more thank you for the correction
Now is it a haiku or not?! lol.
Has it got an iambic pentameters in it? - whatever they are?!
Maybe I’m not a poet seriously
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