What it takes to be great

Ok Waleed


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so you want to be better than I 

well here’s a haiku to teach you

Be human, Be You, Be 

  • Author: Ok Waleed (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 6th, 2023 01:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: Not really a haiku but whatever
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 9
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  • Goldfinch60

    So better than I
    You would truly like to be,
    Well keep on trying.

    This is the haiku format but it is more a senryu than haiku, haiku are about nature senryu are about human nature.

    Andy

    • Ok Waleed

      Woah I never heard of senryu I think I’m going to focus on that more thank you for the correction

    • orchidee

      Now is it a haiku or not?! lol.
      Has it got an iambic pentameters in it? - whatever they are?!

      • Ok Waleed

        Maybe I’m not a poet seriously



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