Ticking time
Is an alarming Rhyme
Tick tock! Tick Tock!
Goes the chiming clock
A pinch of sunshine
Will make the day mine
Immersed in birdsong
I shall trudge along
With nature's tellers of time
Time keepers so sublime
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Good words Thinkerbell. Nature is the best clock of all.
Andy
'A pinch of sunshine
Will make the day mine'
Brilliant!
Thank you so much dear poet🥰
Wonderful poem, thinkerbell! I love the description....the second stanza is my favorite!! Brilliant rhymes....Christina
Thank you dear Christina...I'm glad you liked it🥰
A great thought with clever use of images and a different way to look at time. Well different no, only for modern times. Nature is the clock we ignore. Loved the peom and the image.
Thank you so much for your appreciation dear poet🥰
Songbirds are nature's time-keepers, but are of course not a clock. Not mechanical and exacting. But incredibly honest, they never manipulate time like our bosses and doctors and grocery stores and TV channels. They adjust, go with the flow, but are always true. Ask Romeo and Juliet. If it's the lark, time to split!
Yeah you're right songbirds are the best time-keepers😁
there is always a way to connect with the rhythms of the world around us and find moments of peace and harmony.
Absolutely right😁
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