With Both Eyes Closed
Even with both eyes closed
it wasn’t hard to see
while the rest of the world
had been blinded ..
There were still those of us
who insist, the greater good
has already, been bettered ..
Indeed, a long time ago now ..
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Neville (
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I've not got both eyes closed yet. I'm still working out how to blink with one eye. Eh??
This is how I spend me 'sad' life, on things like that! lol.
to be honest my furry friend, that's not only too bad but also, two sad .. toodle ooh 🐧🐭😎👍
(blind Hope, for those of us
who dream, eyes Wide shut!)
a lovely read & message Hyung
Thank you Mek .. & truly
The greater good is for each individual to assess Neville.
Enjoy your break.
Andy
How write you are Cheers 🙂
Literal mind intrudes once more...Please elucidate the terminology for the less than sophisticated: i.e. define 'greater good' and 'bettered' in this context...
Enjoy the break, Nev - if you are close to snowbound, to beat a retreat seems strategic....
please forgive this late but nevertheless much appreciated & otherwise welcomed visit Dave .. I needed the break .. I assure you I will endeavour to respond more fully when I am more than presently recovered ..
Closed eyes see more than we could imagine when all around groping in near insanity the world never sees simple wonders and awareness evolving - --- - - well that's how this intriguing message appears to me........x
that'll do nicely Fay .. I thank you and dearly .. x
Wonderful poem and I hope you have an awesome vacation!! Clearing the snow? Its like our seasons have switched!
thank you C .. yes, it sure felt like it from where I was standing .. I desperately needed that slice of sun .. 🐧
Your words of wisdom are both comforting and so true dear friend. Thank you for this parting piece, and look forward to your return. Safe travels!
it is perfectly clear to me that my belated thanks dear Bella, are long overdue .. but most sincerely now sent & thank you for the visit and all you left behind to warrant them ..
Both eyes closed is when the mind doth indulge
Take in a whiff of imagination or desires…
Anyhow, I see your point .. Tis true
my word Ms Dove, your little note left me filled with a warm wonderment and a kinda floaty feeling deep inside my tummy 🐧💜
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