Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
No Reason Required
She was so very easy on the eye
even down
to the crescent shaped scar she
never tried to hide ..
And which, so many of her lovers
found intriguing ..
Yet in spite of everything, I cannot
for the very life of me
remember why, we ever parted ..
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Neville (
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This is too much for me and KP. I mean, if I told you where she had a scar, I would swoon. And - have I seen it?! Woof, you can't tell anyone, says Fido. (it's a botox scar of course. lol).
you could always message me of course 🐧🐭
Parting they say is always sweet sorrow - The vision you pen is so easy on the eye that I can almost see where her crescent scar is hiding.
Bless you my very favest of Fay's 💚🐧x
Sometimes we remember things we wish we could forget and other times we forget things we wish we could remember. Perhaps, those forgotten moments are best left un-discovered.
Your poem leaves the reader guessing, which indicates that it has accomplished stirring their imagination. Without description of person, place, or thing each can build their own scenery. Quite intriguing. - Phil A.
You are of course, absolutely write on target Mr. MF27 and I thank you once again for your appraisal of my little scribble sir Phil .. Many thanks indeed .. Neville
The tone of your poem is so soft and gentle, I can almost see the hint of a smile on your face as you pen this reminiscence. It's often those half forgotten memories that for some reason seem the sweetest. Lovely dear friend.
I really cannot thank you enough for those heart-warming & likewise, encouraging words Bella ..
Yet can, but only try .. Thank you, your friend, Me ..
A question that will always be with you Neville.
Andy
and I shall henceforth keep my eyes and my ears open for the answer, until the very moment of my own personal enlightenment .. cheers Andy
such a relatable theme, Hyung
loved your pacing and accessible wording
(Scars, we relate with
share, moments with
have a way of tainting our memories
so resplendently, vivid
yet inevitably, dipped in that regretful
...tint)
all that you noted, is appropriately and appreciatively likewise noted brother M .. N
Good write❤️
many very sincere thank you's sir .. Neville 🙂
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