Upon the Very Cusp of Spring

Neville

Upon the Very Cusp of Spring

 

the sighting

of those

first few snowdrops ..

and that

single daffodil

this brand new year ..

felt like

the beginning of spring

and the making of a poem perhaps ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 26th, 2023 02:57
  • Comment from author about the poem: a bit late in posting, but one sure hopes that the smile shines through ..🔆
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 24
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  • orchidee

    Ya can't beat a bit of cusping!
    What am I on about. I dunno! lol.

    • Neville



      Absolutely spot on Mr. O .. I dunno either but you are write about cusping 🐭👍

      • orchidee

        Would I swoon if I cusped? lol.

        • Neville



          I always do ................................................... 🐭🐧🐭👍

          • Michael Edwards

            You can't beat a good cusp..!

            • orchidee

              Anyone know Miss Cusp? Related to Miss (Sylla) Berles?! I'm talking rubbish now!

            • Fay Slimm.

              Am smiling with you dear poet as Spring births this verse to first cusp of bright unfold. Loved the read.........x

              • Neville


                ......................... thank you so much Fay .. x

              • Doggerel Dave

                The relief shines through...perhaps, just maybe, spring followed be summer will be......

                • Neville



                  let's bloomin hope so .. I'm a tad late with me pruning tho 🙂

                • Bella Shepard

                  Spring is so hopeful of new life, and the smile definitely smiles through. Thank you dear friend for these sweet words on such a beautiful Spring morn.

                  • Neville



                    to be honest, I was having a lousy day until about 15 seconds ago .. being on call don't help .. but you most certainly did .. thanks Bella 💚

                  • Michael Edwards

                    Nice one N - love shorties - they get to the point and don't waffle - now I'm beginning to sound like Orchi.

                    • Neville



                      and I feel like swooning ..

                    • L. B. Mek

                      our beloved blighty
                      sure is keeping us waiting this year, Hyung
                      is it still April showers
                      if it's been 'at it', since
                      sombre, November...
                      lol
                      'and that
                      single daffodil
                      this brand new year ..'
                      wonderfully subtle musicality
                      in your rhyming scheme
                      (I read and learn)

                      • Neville



                        I am now spoilt n true sir brother Mek .. many thank you's accordingly dispatched & writefully so

                      • Accidental Poet

                        The smile of Spring always shines through N. 😉

                        • Neville


                          it does indeed .. and now you are spoiling me my friend, bless you .. N 🙂

                          • Accidental Poet

                            A master poet doesn't spoil, like fine wine gets better with age. 😉



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