Our Sweet and Sticky Mouths
Somewhere in the very
welcome mess
of good old here and now
mid a pretty tumble
of creased, white sheets
and likewise,
our discarded underwear ..
I lay sprawled,
with both my eyes closed
and urge you to
complete what from here
at least, feels like it must
surely be your
latest mission .. now near
accomplished ..
And I wonder, but only very
briefly so ..
If it might be possible to feel
any more relaxed
or comfortable, than this ..
But the length
and the depth of my last
gasp and sigh
told me no .. so choose to
dream instead of
blue butterflies and tiny
hummingbirds
each sipping nectar from
the creases and the
stretch marks I imagine
must by now have
formed, at each corner of
my satisfied smile
and notice again, I no longer
crave cigarettes ..
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Author:
Neville (
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The poem is a celebration of the transformative power of intimacy and the sense of fulfillment that it can bring.
its an honour to have you visit them M .. N 🙂
Boo hoo, I gets no 'tumbles' with KP.
'Just don't give us the descriptions of you and KP in bed', they say. 'It's too ghastly and TMI - Too Much Info!' We hardly share a bed anyway. Or if we do, I can't say I recognise her much with that botox! heehee.
You are more batty than a fruit bat & more nutty than a big bag of KP ready salted sir 🦇🦇🥥🥥🐧
lol
that's one way to paint over our vices
then again
it's only a temporary solution
just like that momentary gratification
.. well it's all good n fun, if both willing
reminds me of that good will hunting joke,
all the same:
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UGqmfzxg_zw
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if the whole thing is as good as the clip in the link, I really must see it .. I've been meaning to for ages, thanks for nudging me in the write direction 🙂
This is an excellent piece...I love how you said what you said without actually just saying it....if that makes sense....wonderful!
.. it makes perfect sense C and I thank you BIGLY 🌹
The cigarettes were only a circumstantial ornament anyway. Well penned N.
I've lost track, of the number of years it has been, since I last lit up .. but every now and then, I still fancy one .. cheers AP 🙂
I believe my friend you have added another definition of the word "Satiatian", will probably show up in the next addition to the OED. Wow, Congratulations!
Now wouldn't that be a fine thing .. sheeeeeeeesh, I almost slipped of my pedestal .. bless you Bella
Not to worry, I think that your footing on that pedestal is quite secure.
Well blue butterflies will do it every time!
little rascals aint they ..... 🦋
Wonderful words Neville showing how wonderful the thoughts are when in bed.
Andy
thank you kindly and truly Andy
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