Chirping chorus
Of mellow music
Chimes with the wind
Wafting across the wonderful world
Soaring, sailing
In open blue skies
Flying, fleeing
From predatory eyes
Or recovering
From a broken wing
The song of a songbird
Is always heard
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This poem is so beautifully descriptive of what I experience each day on my morning walk. The peace and quiet broken only by a songbird. Thank you dear poet!
Thank you dear poet 🥰
I identify with this bird! Great job, dear friend and poet!
Thank you dear poet😍
This poem is so beautiful and I can imagine a clear picture in front of my eyes. Well written!!!
Thank you so much..I'm glad you liked it😍
Why is it a wonderful world.? Maybe it’s more powerful if you set up that line w some justification developed in the lines previous?
Chimes musically gift us w music lushly mellow that rides gently like natures perfect undulating tide over the chirps offered by birds perfectly unwrapping secrets of natures wind wafting in symc and this gravity defying ballet escapes into the backdrop of this wondrous world.
I exaggerated the point but it’s important to offer proof and substantiate what we hold in wonder and not just say so.
-BTW , I’m just sharing the wisdom of what I learned from somebody way smarter than me. I constantly fall into the same traps that dilute the power of our well thought plan.
Thank you for your advice . I'll surely work on that🥰
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