Hungry longing
Following through life
Compelled to fill an emptiness
Longing that's one step short of tears
With fearful walls that silence builds
And battles we can't seem to overcome
Ah the hopefulness of journey
Where the only prize worth winning
Is a love
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Good write Lorna.
I'm longing for summat, ya know. I suffer ya know, married to KP! lol.
Oh dear......... well we love you............
'You talk some rubbish sometimes, Orchi,' says Fido!
The poem effectively captures the human experience of longing for love and the struggle to overcome emotional barriers.
Doing hard stuff is hard
Doing nothing is NOTHING
Personally I've had enough of doing hard stuff........thanks for visiting
A poignant write🥰
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