Hungry longing

Following through life

Compelled to fill an emptiness

Longing that's one step short of tears

With fearful walls that silence builds

And battles we can't seem to overcome

Ah the hopefulness of journey

Where the only prize worth winning

Is a love

  • Author: Lorna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 8th, 2023 04:05
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Bobby O.


  • orchidee

    Good write Lorna.
    I'm longing for summat, ya know. I suffer ya know, married to KP! lol.

    • Lorna

      Oh dear......... well we love you............

      • orchidee

        'You talk some rubbish sometimes, Orchi,' says Fido!

      • Mottakeenur Rehman

        The poem effectively captures the human experience of longing for love and the struggle to overcome emotional barriers.

      • Accidental Poet

        Love makes the world go round, yes? 😊

        • Lorna

          Yes but it wobbles...........

          • Accidental Poet

            hahahahaha, yes my dear, it definitely wobbles. 😁

          • Bobby O

            Doing hard stuff is hard
            Doing nothing is NOTHING

            • Lorna

              Personally I've had enough of doing hard stuff........thanks for visiting

            • thinkerbell

              A poignant write🥰

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