Pomegranate

Parisab

I’ll pick those red round things with the ruby seeds inside.

I’ll want your breath, warning me to doubt my wishes

I’ll take that pomegranate from the tree. 

Look! It’s dancing with the wind as it sheds all its orange blossoms!! 

My friend tells me it will heal us and will free us from boredom.

I’ll even dance for you to make you look, when the sky leaves us for the sun.

I dreamt that it will doom us, but we’ll wake up in each other’s arms.

I want you and I want it all!

The wind carries the words of liberation.

Let’s blame it on the wind.

Let shame fulfill us with the scent of pomegranates!

  • Author: Parisab (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 8th, 2023 14:49
  • Comment from author about the poem: The fanciful whims of a woman
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  • Kurt Philip Behm

    "Let shame fulfill us with the scent of pomegranates!"

    Great closing line !

  • Bobby O

    It’s so BRAVE to claim desired and deserved fun using the word SHAME and skillfully making it work. Damn.

  • Parisab

    You are so kind to I’ve of your time resources to familiarize yourself with some of my scribbles-Soon I may request your feedback of pairings of poems for a collection-thank you poet friend.

  • Parisab

    *spend of your time resources

  • jarcher54

    Pomegranates are the sexiest of fruits. Your whole poem is full of heavy serious joy. This is a grown-up ode by a creative soul.

  • Parisab

    Hi again poet friend-the theory is that eve’s Apple was actually a pomegranate-thanks for your positive comments

  • Garth Rakumakoe

    So the title caught my attention, and the content justified and exonerated it. Abstract in form, subliminal and attractive in color. A picture worth every second of deserved admiration. 🙏🏼

  • Parisab

    Thank you for your reaction with the senses and your sophisticated insight, dear poet! I’ll be visiting your writes very soon🙏

  • Neville


    you can beat an egg, a rug and a drum .. but you just can't beat being fulfilled with the scent of pomegranates .. 🙂

    • Parisab

      Sir, you are cooking with the fruit of the Original Sin! Thanks for taking the time and visiting an older poem, Neville

    • falcon_mn

      Thanks for a beautiful poem
      Three closing lines are so strong and effective! Bravo!

    • Thomas W Case

      Great work. Strange, I always thought the pomegranate was a sensual fruit. Something about those seeds. Well crafted and powerful.

      • Parisab

        You are so kind to connect with this poem and comment in an helpful manner. Yes, it is believed that eve’s Apple was actually a pomegranate…



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