Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Now isn’t that
truly something else
something
wonderful no less ..
While no longer
taught and flat
but lightly bowed
and more
convex perhaps ..
I hereby do confess
I am already
very much in love
with what has
just begun to show ..
But for now
at least, kept safe
and warm and hid ..
Beneath her
pretty summer dress ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Before anyone gets any bright ideas, this is both about & for my daughter who is expecting my first grandchild in July ❤️
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Good write Neville.
If you had not explained this, I would comment a 'bright idea' of....... I never go there with KP, it would bring on a swoon! lol.
maybe you should do her a favour and loan her out .. 🐭
You beaten that egg? Notice the side-track there from me, to save myself swooning! lol. I been trying to beat choccie Easter eggs since Sunday. Doh!
All better now N? Congratulations and then some Granpappy........
Hello Lorna, unfortunately I am still pretty rough but at least out of bed .. Unable to return to work until next week but yes, thank you, I am a very happy pre-grandpappy 🐧
Glad you're a bit better at least........ just relax now.....
Such a bundle of penned love for an as yet unborn but specially welcome new family member from a happy Grandad - -this is a write Nev. that your daughter will always treasure....x
a gift of utmost kindness from the one and only Lady Fay Slimm .. many thanks my friend and true 🤍x
The poem's themes of hidden beauty and the complexity of human nature are conveyed through a conversational tone that creates an intimate connection between the poet and the reader.
I'm more than happy with that .. thank you Mott 🙂
Bright ideas grow into little bouncing bundle of joys. Congrats Grandad. 👼
I'm sure its gonna take some getting used to .. cheers AP 🐧
Dear Sir Grandpop - - Meant to state that July is a proper girt month in which to be dropped - well at least that's what Cornish sages say.........x
such sapience is well worth the knowing .. not only for the moment, but just in case I ever get the urge to sow a few seeds again .. 🤍 x
I am sure that grandchild will be showered with love Neville.
Andy
You bet'cha bill she will Andy ...... Cheers 🐧🤍🐧
such intimacy of worded warmth
many a grand parent 'to be'
would recognise your sentiments
(I'm keeping everything crossed
that all goes well, Hyung!
and a champagne on ice, you know
to help you celebrate
as the thoughtful friend i am, lol)
🙏😎🍾
Bless you bro 😎
Well, pray tell if you left it to the imagination.
But alas, the beauty of a blossoming womb.
I hope she has a great and easy birth.
Thank you my friend .. me too 🐧💜🕊️
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