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The freedom to survey, the challenge to convey
Sparks w first light each day
Noticing of course that it's a therapeutic force
a personal source of delight that carries from dawn to twilight.
Rage rage against unfair moments, pave pave the way for fair ascent. Make a difference if I can , learn from Queens and honored man. Write write, disperse or lock it w a key, just interact w this universe and destiny.
Bobby O
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Words, they be at our convenience if we so let them be!
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Words are the poets tool to deal with this world. Choosing the right ones is the quandary we face This poem alludes to some of the finest words ever written. It calls for "making a difference." I heartily agree, - Phil A.
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Ah! Love it. I'm gonna read more of your work.
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Interesting nicely expressed poem I especially like the last line with mention of the universe and destiny ))
Very astute. I had those last two lines written for a month and I kinda liked them as a moral or suggestion to any who cared but they stood naked until I had phrase that would get me to them. Man, I had some clunkers or else it seemed I was forcing just to get use of my “ending “ until the line “ noticing if course that it’s a therapeutic force” , I felt that let me lend a substance to the beginning and therefore some balance. Then I wrote it in about ten minutes. This poetry thing is a weird thing.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and taking your time to respond. I’m grateful. I read your stuff and like it. I am open to critique and would hope that you share your thoughts where I might improve ?It’s not always about throwing flowers , the art deserves honest assessment. BTW, I have pissed some people off with criticism , but WTF, I hate when they give everybody trophies. Thanks for reading this unplanned length of response. I guess that was decent weed I just smoked??
Hello ) thanks for reading my poems . Yeah , I do think some people take criticism quite strongly and I guess we all want nice comments on our poems .. sorry that you have upset a few people on here .. I think ‘ nobody’s perfect ‘ but yeah criticism can affect people , in ways I guess . I don’t think there’s anything wrong in saying where we might improve in our poetry .. that might even be helpful to some
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