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Aware, your destiny twisting,
diluted existing, spiritually drifting, resisting denial,
you acknowledge it's their trial ,
THEY, now perpetrators disowned ,
Alone,
always shallow stepping life's miles.
You Shed Them.
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Author:
Bobby O (
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- Comment from author about the poem: You figure out the people in your life that are bringing you down and you take measures to remove them from your life.
- Category: Reflection
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A great message to be true to one's self. Nicely said.
Thank you for the read and for the understanding. A favor ? A while back I won a poet of the month and the web magazine made a video. It was the first piece I posted and it seems to have kinda gotten lost with hardly any views so I’m hoping if I ask nicely a few more May view? The piece speaks to how I think Hip Hop and Jazz are the same. If that concept slightly interests you ….?
It’s titled Thelonious Reborn as The Dee oh Double G. Thanks
If you lie with dogs you get fleas. Sometimes , letting them go is the only option.
An expressive poem about keeping company with only those who can help you. - Phil A.
You’re a monster
Perpetrators disowned-
Those realizations in life can be brutal and heart breaking. In the end it's the shedding of them that leads to healing.
Wonderful piece!
Very kind my friend.
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