CORRECTION

Bobby O

CORRECTION
Aware, your destiny twisting,

diluted existing, spiritually drifting, resisting denial, 

you acknowledge it's their trial ,

THEY, now perpetrators disowned ,

Alone,

always shallow stepping life's miles. 
You Shed Them. 

  • Author: Bobby O (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 19th, 2023 06:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: You figure out the people in your life that are bringing you down and you take measures to remove them from your life.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 9
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Comments4

  • sorenbarrett

    A great message to be true to one's self. Nicely said.

  • Bobby O

    Thank you for the read and for the understanding. A favor ? A while back I won a poet of the month and the web magazine made a video. It was the first piece I posted and it seems to have kinda gotten lost with hardly any views so I’m hoping if I ask nicely a few more May view? The piece speaks to how I think Hip Hop and Jazz are the same. If that concept slightly interests you ….?
    It’s titled Thelonious Reborn as The Dee oh Double G. Thanks

  • MendedFences27

    If you lie with dogs you get fleas. Sometimes , letting them go is the only option.
    An expressive poem about keeping company with only those who can help you. - Phil A.

    • Bobby O

      You’re a monster

    • L.Jacobs

      Perpetrators disowned-

      Those realizations in life can be brutal and heart breaking. In the end it's the shedding of them that leads to healing.

      Wonderful piece!

      • Bobby O

        Very kind my friend.



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