Once I drink from the milky moon
And my wings flap, steadfast
Once I hover around to hear life
But silence between each flight feels flat
I only resist to close the curtains
My eyes widen, resisting darkness
Restless I dance to feed from the earth’s synergy
Like giving birth to infinity
We visit our great visits,
but we all must go
We’re merely guests
and the night won’t obliterate
That the time is faster than the speed of light
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Dreamy atmosphere. Beautiful imagery my friend.
I was experimenting writing (and editing) in a dreamlike state:) Many thanks.
You express the dream of life most vividly with this engagingly good imagery - - thank you for sharing your Midnight Flight dear poet-friend.
honored by your words dear poet and friend
Great imagery dear poet..loved the dreamscape you created 🥰
Thank you for your kind comment and attention, dear poet friend
Brilliant!
'Restless I dance to feed from the earth’s synergy
Like giving birth to infinity'
I am humbled by your comments dear poet.
If the perfunctory science that Einstein first felt true as thought experiments before the equations were stamped indelible , this piece danced with its poetic beauty and resonates on many levels. Read it four times and only them timidly attempt to whisper my thoughts.
You are most gracious for giving this a second look-I experimented with writing with delta like brain wave speed (sleep like:)) I get some of the philosophical part about quantum physics, but as the mathematical equation, my brain at most alert, would not grasp-
I like both your opening and closing lines (so important)
Thank you for your attention and feedback.
A wonderfully written piece here Parisab, to me, each word helps to create a beautiful wispy cloud, and when fully formed, the last words of your poem, speak volumes of the unfair swiftness of life.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
Thank you for visiting and your thoughtful attention.
Lovely my earths synergy
Giving birth to infinity lovely lines to hear thanks so much
Glad that sleepless night, took you to a pleasant place, always appreciate it Sunset…
Very well crafted. Surreal and dreamy.
Thank you for the visit and useful comments…
Hi, what an amazing piece of art, you take the readers on a wonderful journey, thank you.
Thank you Eileen! I’m so glad you visited and enjoyed!
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