I started on a project
A few years ago
Involved ashes and acid
Thought I was in the know
After some disappointment
And in a time of need
I put it in a cupboard
To return to when things are lean
All of this solution
I don't know how to ask
I'll try electrowinning
Either way could be a blast
The results were amazing
Black sludge everywhere
I counted up my blessing
Forgetting past despair
My hopes were tempered
I shouldn't be surprised
A wash in nitric acid
Dissolved my fortune before my eyes
The little left I washed and rinsed
And repeated over at length
Then I hit it with AR and now have a cocktail
That looks like creme de menthe.
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- Published: April 23rd, 2023 02:37
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Sounds like a plan. I like the rhyme scheme and the prose that leads to perhaps a joyous climax. Nice piece
I live in hope! Thanks for your kind response.
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Thelonious Reborn Ad the Dee Oh Double G. Wud really appreciate your thoughts? Thanks
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