I started on a project
A few years ago
Involved ashes and acid
Thought I was in the know
After some disappointment
And in a time of need
I put it in a cupboard
To return to when things are lean
All of this solution
I don't know how to ask
I'll try electrowinning
Either way could be a blast
The results were amazing
Black sludge everywhere
I counted up my blessing
Forgetting past despair
My hopes were tempered
I shouldn't be surprised
A wash in nitric acid
Dissolved my fortune before my eyes
The little left I washed and rinsed
And repeated over at length
Then I hit it with AR and now have a cocktail
That looks like creme de menthe.
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Sounds like a plan. I like the rhyme scheme and the prose that leads to perhaps a joyous climax. Nice piece
I live in hope! Thanks for your kind response.
Not sure if you have any interest in jazz but if you do even a little, please check out a piece I posted that speaks to how I think jazz and hip hop are the same. It titled
Thelonious Reborn Ad the Dee Oh Double G. Wud really appreciate your thoughts? Thanks
Not sure if you have any interest in jazz but if you do even a little, please check out a piece I posted that speaks to how I think jazz and hip hop are the same. It titled
Thelonious Reborn Ad the Dee Oh Double G. Wud really appreciate your thoughts? Thanks
I would if I could, but I can't so I won't! Not sure where to find it?
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It’s a video
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I did try, but my skills match my eyes! I try long hand.
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