ESCAPABLE TARGETS

Bobby O

ESCAPABLE TARGETS
Imagine the power to gather the Gods grace that is your humble reward, your born impulse to share and you honorably direct it toward, disbelievers that lack grace and evil they no longer fight, you Summon, you yearn, plead their hearts fill with might, but sadly you acknowledge, it's an impossible plight. Cry not dear warrior who never will fear the grim reaper, some lost souls just stay lost, remember, each and all are their own keeper +
Bobby O

  • Author: Bobby O (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 24th, 2023 01:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: Despite best efforts to help or save some people they just keep getting in their own way and the logic of survival escapes them over and over. This piece speaks to those regrettable occasions.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • L. B. Mek

    forgive the toxic and unnecessary words below, dear poet
    they're not targeting you, but just
    the general verbiage of 'people of faith'
    trying to save the world, by cutting it up
    into their own, valuation pieces
    based on doctrine, inked
    millennia ago by fingers, as fallible
    as you and I...
    (personally
    I dream of a world
    where having faith
    doesn't denote, a self righteous
    mindset
    to judge and hurt others,
    'in the name of doing, good'
    where instead of oneness
    and collective togetherness
    people
    wish for a segregated humanity
    where only 'their faith'
    reigns supreme?
    surely it's enough
    for faith, to work for that individual
    instead of acting like
    it's another pyramid scheme, where adding
    one more 'believer'
    adds value to your collective worship
    I mean, what kind of deity
    would have their creations, be born
    in a home of one faith
    separate from yours
    and yet, only one set of beliefs
    can save a soul?)
    anyway, but what do I know?
    forgive my overzealous and antagonistic words
    if you can,
    I genuinely
    never want to be disparaging, about a person's chosen faith
    just, some of the zealot 'need'
    to force others, to follow in line
    still, I'm sorry if my words
    infuriate
    forgive me

  • Bobby O

    Speak loud and true.

  • 2781

    "He that is unjust, let him be unjust still:



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