After summer days, the clouds gather
Wind stressing the layers move fast
Clouds get ready to descend and pour
Below, the sky is dark and spread so vast
When sleep slowly conquers the eyes
Descending sounds of rain at night,
That cosmic rhythm of falling drops
With breeze come inside, not in sight
Feeling fresh for moving of soothing air
Instead of sighs, the noise of rain hears
Senses calm and sway to sleep in solace
So comfortable, rare moments embraces...
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Author:
G REMADEVI (
Offline) - Published: April 28th, 2023 06:08
- Category: Nature
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I used to dread rain storms but now appreciate the cleansing and life giving effects they bring. Stay dry!
Really nice. Too many great aspects to list. It felt real and also like an analogous metaphor. So cool
We get to choose. “ instead of sighs “
“Sway to sleep in silence”
Very rich Thank you.
I've always loved storms until I didn't, then I remembered what I knew and am back on track.
(a great write!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
I love driving, playing, walking
and most especially, sleeping
in the rain
'droplets of respite
drumming windows, to serenade
invite, that melancholic
sweet embrace of our worries
allowing us, moody
moments of serenity's, reprieve'
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