Shelf life
In a week the bananas rot
But the apples and oranges not
The dried chilli ｓtill spices me to tears
Properly canned they may keep for years
Cheese out of milk survive by ｍanyａdecade
In my fridge things have never decayed
Ｗhy so anti-anticorrosive
I might keep immortal
If I have much preservative
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Author:
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Comments1
It switched to metaphor at the end and I’m thinking that conclusion may benefit from another line or two of transition support. ??
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