we meet for the first time
in the industrial kitchen
of just one more shitty job,
but there are still sparks when
our hands touch
i know you from somewhere,
i’m sure of it, and
i wonder if you can feel the way
that the blood in me calls out
to the blood in you
there’s a history there that we
have the power to write,
and i wish we could have been
kids together
before everything became just
a little more than could be carried
without leaving its own set of scars,
i would have liked to sit in the
green grass of a summer day and
pick flowers for you,
with you
and we can still do that, ya know,
be something akin to kids together,
in that carefree way children have
let’s go out and find a big,
grassy hill to climb, and i’ll bring
a picnic basket with the food you like,
and we can sit side by side,
and tuck flowers behind each other’s ears
and i want to meet you,
again and again,
hold your hand and smile at the
way you say my name back to me,
like i’m something,
someone, worth remembering
i don’t just want to grow old with you,
i want to grow up with you, too
- Author: Boaz Priestly (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: May 5th, 2023 21:09
- Category: Love
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- Users favorite of this poem: James Michael, Bella.26
Comments4
This is a very good poem and I enjoyed it very much so.
Thank you for reading! I enjoyed writing this one immensely
My goodness, this pervading sensation of nostalgia and wistful love is literally so evocative. Like your yearning for a sweet relationship, similar to the one shared as children, truly highlights your desire for a strong, firm bond. The last line is also such a wonderful line: wanting to not only grow old, but also mature in a relationship. This reminds me of a song by New Zealand singer Lorde entitled "Ribs." (I highly recommend it).
What high praise! Thank you so much! I’ll give that song a listen 🙂
So intensely romantic. The images that come to mind put me in a dream state. Thank you kindly for sharing this gem with us!
Wonderful new profile pic.!
Always good to hear from you, my friend!
This is one of my favorites I’ve written so far this year.
And thank you! Figured it was about time I show my face around here
There’s such a nice feeling to the words you write .. lovely gentle tone to many of your words 🙂
Good poem I liked reading this
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