I thought I lost it all,
All hope had disappeared,
But then I met you,
And suddenly everything was clear.
Your love brought me back to life,
A light in the darkness of my despair,
My last hope, my guiding star,
A love so true and rare.
We walk hand in hand,
Through the ups and downs of life,
With you by my side,
I know I'll survive.
Love is the conductor,
Of this journey we're on,
Guiding us through the twists and turns,
Until the final dawn.
So I hold on to you,
My last hope, my love divine,
Together we'll face the world,
Until the end of time.
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Author:
Dev parth (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is a beautiful and heartfelt poem that expresses the idea of finding hope and love in a time of despair. The imagery of darkness and despair contrasted with the light and guidance of love is powerful, and the idea of love as a conductor on the journey of life is creative and original. The use of simple, direct language and a consistent rhyme scheme helps to convey the emotion and message of the poem effectively. Overall, the poem is a lovely tribute to the power of love and the hope it can bring to our lives.
- Category: Love
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Comments1
Nice content but you use the same subject/verb sentence structure throughout and that detracts from the message
For example , a quick rearrange 2nd stanza
ie;
Conducting this journey we’re on is love
As destiny guides us from above
Through twists and turns
Our Embers burn
Joined until the final dawn
Thankyou so much for your feedback 🙏.
I will try my best to improve my writing skills.
🙏🙏🙏
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