Love Potion No.19

Parisab

If I miss the signs 
and drink love potion
Ecstasy will sin
and be in full motion
Two voices will rise
as waves of an ocean
Embrace with sacrifice 
as slippery fish of devotion
We’ll forget the cuts
and claim preemption                             We’ll spread big nets                               and ‘ll thread our commotion 

 

 

 

  • Author: Parisab (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 6th, 2023 16:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: Young Love
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 32
  • Users favorite of this poem: Bobby O, Teddy.15
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  • Bobby O

    Jumping in w integrity and honor , I’m certain is , was, and will always be your only choice.

  • Parisab

    Thank you for your sagacious viewing of the poem, poet friend-I guess as poets we respond the same way to the world and project our nature and point of view.

  • Peter Gates

    You've certainly caught the essence of love. Enjoyed this.

  • Parisab

    Thank you for the care you put in reading this

  • Bella Shepard

    Young love's niavete lasts briefly, but is never forgotten. The first palpatations of the heart awaken in us to emotions thrilling, confusing, perhaps a little frightening, but exhilerating. Such a good write dear poet!

    • Parisab

      Yes, exactly-even in the age of the gen Z-thank you for taking the care to read and comment.

    • L. B. Mek

      wonderfully creative
      'batch no.19'
      what matters most, is that we find
      hope/strength, stubbornness enough
      to keep experimenting and hoping
      'We’ll forget the cuts
      and claim preemption '
      not settling
      for those shallow solutions
      of love potion mirages...
      (just a great read, dear Poet
      your insightful poetry
      as eloquently refined, as-ever)
      thank you!
      (widening our word spacing
      like we widen our fishing nets
      of hope,
      a showcasing of wordless imagery)

    • Parisab

      Thank you for your great power of observation and your elevated expertise to see through the words. I appreciate your helpful comments, poet-friend.

    • MendedFences27

      Wow! Great write. Love by "potion" or otherwise, leads to sacrifice and devotion. Such is life. Wisdom of experience laced with morality and understanding. Wise words indeed. - Phil A.

      • Parisab

        Thank you for your kind and generous comments.

      • Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer

        Exquisite ink. Magnificently crafted.

        • Parisab

          Thank you for your observant and kind comments, sir.

        • Neville


          I'll take two bottles of No 19 thank you very much ..

          What a treat it was to find these words this mane .. Thanks for the ride back down way back when I missed the signs oh' so many times ... Neville

        • Parisab

          Thank you and Stay thirsty poet friend…

        • Sunsetmet

          Just lovely well put together
          Two voices** will rise waves an ocean embrace* that is nice Thanks

          • Parisab

            Thank you for your attention and insight!

          • DREEK0

            Experience is the journey to the destination of choice. "what fuels the misinterpretation of our sexual energy" I think, Is the question that would lead us to our highest, and lowest parts of ourselves
            'Love potion No 19' is a great read

          • Parisab

            Thank you for your input and insight-looking forward to visiting more of your words and distinct voice, in the near future…

          • Parisab

            Thanks my dear poet friend-my words described that intoxicated feeling-I know if you’re aware that research suggests the brain releases those intense chemicals couple times in a life span and after that it releases the chemicals for attachment and bonding (and more mature and stable love:))

          • Thomas W Case

            You capture the passion and drive well here.

          • Parisab

            Glad I tried and happy that you enjoyed the read…

          • Teddy.15

            I simply adore this type of commotion Parisab, wonderful and filled with emotion. ❤️

            • Parisab

              That commotion is everything, sister poet:) Next is for me to work on my Italian, which is hard not being in the country:)

              • Teddy.15

                work on it anytime with me sister poet : ) i'm still learning this beautiful language every day its been 22 years now. tanti abbracci

                • Parisab

                  sarebbe grandioso🤗

                  • Teddy.15

                    Già anche per me. Buonanotte.



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