If I miss the signs
and drink love potion
Ecstasy will sin
and be in full motion
Two voices will rise
as waves of an ocean
Embrace with sacrifice
as slippery fish of devotion
We’ll forget the cuts
and claim preemption We’ll spread big nets and ‘ll thread our commotion
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Jumping in w integrity and honor , I’m certain is , was, and will always be your only choice.
Thank you for your sagacious viewing of the poem, poet friend-I guess as poets we respond the same way to the world and project our nature and point of view.
You've certainly caught the essence of love. Enjoyed this.
Thank you for the care you put in reading this
Young love's niavete lasts briefly, but is never forgotten. The first palpatations of the heart awaken in us to emotions thrilling, confusing, perhaps a little frightening, but exhilerating. Such a good write dear poet!
Yes, exactly-even in the age of the gen Z-thank you for taking the care to read and comment.
wonderfully creative
'batch no.19'
what matters most, is that we find
hope/strength, stubbornness enough
to keep experimenting and hoping
'We’ll forget the cuts
and claim preemption '
not settling
for those shallow solutions
of love potion mirages...
(just a great read, dear Poet
your insightful poetry
as eloquently refined, as-ever)
thank you!
(widening our word spacing
like we widen our fishing nets
of hope,
a showcasing of wordless imagery)
Thank you for your great power of observation and your elevated expertise to see through the words. I appreciate your helpful comments, poet-friend.
Wow! Great write. Love by "potion" or otherwise, leads to sacrifice and devotion. Such is life. Wisdom of experience laced with morality and understanding. Wise words indeed. - Phil A.
Thank you for your kind and generous comments.
Exquisite ink. Magnificently crafted.
Thank you for your observant and kind comments, sir.
I'll take two bottles of No 19 thank you very much ..
What a treat it was to find these words this mane .. Thanks for the ride back down way back when I missed the signs oh' so many times ... Neville
Thank you and Stay thirsty poet friend…
Just lovely well put together
Two voices** will rise waves an ocean embrace* that is nice Thanks
Thank you for your attention and insight!
Experience is the journey to the destination of choice. "what fuels the misinterpretation of our sexual energy" I think, Is the question that would lead us to our highest, and lowest parts of ourselves
'Love potion No 19' is a great read
Thank you for your input and insight-looking forward to visiting more of your words and distinct voice, in the near future…
Thanks my dear poet friend-my words described that intoxicated feeling-I know if you’re aware that research suggests the brain releases those intense chemicals couple times in a life span and after that it releases the chemicals for attachment and bonding (and more mature and stable love:))
You capture the passion and drive well here.
Glad I tried and happy that you enjoyed the read…
I simply adore this type of commotion Parisab, wonderful and filled with emotion. ❤️
That commotion is everything, sister poet:) Next is for me to work on my Italian, which is hard not being in the country:)
work on it anytime with me sister poet : ) i'm still learning this beautiful language every day its been 22 years now. tanti abbracci
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