The intrigue is sexy.
Walk with me while we sort it out.
Not here for impression.
Not here for the clout.
Sensing you've already met me.
Taking lost souls
One heart at a time.
Finding the ways
in which to free their minds.
See the dance
Feel the waves
All the right moves
Crack a light in the cave.
Just think of the possible.
A life free from fret.
Thought to be impossible.
You've seen nothing yet.
~Talitha~
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Author:
Introverted Sage (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 16th, 2023 01:15
- Category: Spiritual
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Walk with me while we sort it out …,
That’s the perfect request for the soul of the intended and also brilliant technique to invite the reader to enjoin. How cool of a double bubble is that ??
Yes, yes, yes. My sentiments. 😏 You're good.
🪶Happy writing
Hope you take a minute a read a bit of my offers. Working on stretching my style and invite knowledge from those who know. Like Jill Scott , Let’s take a long walk …,
'from those who know'
Interesting.. tell me more.. what are you looking for?
Freestyle idea exchange. Politemostly but honesty most important. I’m competent but not always able to shift away from a literal style. I need more metaphors without sounding like I force them in.
I see... I would be happy to help where I can. 🪶
Read a few and think about a dorys flourish, like how you addressed the phrase in “walk w me”’
I'm not sure what you mean by dorys flourish? Is there a specific one you'd like me to look at..
I do enjoy putting my spin on others work
Try
Cliche’ No Longet
🪶 graciously
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