first snow blues

arqios


Notice of absence from arqios
Be kind….
…. words don’t rewind

 

 

 

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  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 16th, 2023 06:57
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Agghh, please no, not snow in May!!! lol.

    • arqios

      Poetic snow this time around, rest assured orchi.

    • Rocky Lagou

      I love how you intertwined the passage of love with the water cycle. Such an apt metaphor. Precipitation. Evaporation. Splendid.

      • arqios

        Thanks for highlighting that dear Rocky. One of the best things about going to the beach is the magic of ebb and flow which is quite handier to explore in terms of cycles and seasons that enriches our grasp of life and love and interconnectedness.

      • Neville


        remind me never again to put all my eggs in the same basket with the weather being as fickle as it is around these here parts .. 🐧

        • arqios

          and yet we somehow always forget.. çe la vie

        • Bella Shepard

          This stunning metaphor for love captured in water, its properties, its incredible power and moods, fit so aptly bodies that are in and of themselves 97% water, for without love and water we simply would not exist. Beautiful write!

          • arqios

            Thanks Bella. That just works together quite seamlessly.

          • Caring dove

            Lovely writing 🙂

            • arqios

              Thanks kindly, VB.



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