Lost in the negatives so I don't really want to write, yet I'll push myself to find the words to lay down in a line.
It's not like I don't have many things to love in my life, yet most mornings are filled with a desire to see the year just fly by.
Moment to moment this cycle never ends, like the crowd that just follow with no common sense.
Be it not enough financial comfort or the the right stimulate of choice, it all comes and goes and with the harmony it brought.
To walk with no purpose is to look but not see, everything is rippling as it should be!
As these storms test my balance and ability to breathe, I rest within the notion no words can give me...
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: As much as I love my work... no matter how much it never is enough. Even made myself late just trying to get out of my heads rutt! May we all find the way to harmony in our life.
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We all need harmony and peace )) sometimes it’s very difficult to write isn’t it .. I find when I’m in a certain place I just don’t feel the want to be creative , sometimes
Hello my friend spot on... it comes for a day or so and then goes back in my head for months! Slowly getting worse for years but I'll know I'll find balance again!
Always appreciate your time
You have come a long way Dan, just remember that and you will move forward in a fine life.
Andy
Thank you my friend. I really do try and will till the day I.....
Let's leave it there lol
'everything is rippling as it should be!'
pebbles in our river's of fate
we're too lost, trying to paddle
our destiny's, when the current
of life, already has us
exactly where we should be...
(I love how real you keep your poetic voice
such a feat of transparency, sincerity, bravery!)
stay strong! oh brother of mine
'and miles to go, before we sleep'
a most deserved, serene sleep
Dam that one brought some tears! Not sure why but always so grateful for keeping me grounded ( As much as one can be)
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